"Clow Stories" update
Apr. 28th, 2004 12:04 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
butterflydreamingChapter 9 is up.Chamomile
This is either a sexy or a very unsexy chapter, I haven't decided. Maybe its both. I'm satisfied with it. But I do feel the need to warn you that if you feel a little uncomfortable by the end of it, well, then you're getting what I meant.
Lots going on in this chapter, and unlike Study, it's not really about the sex. (I thought it would be longer, but oh well. It feels right as is.)
Incidently, I made some subtle changes to 8, and now I think that it reads better.
Feedback, as always, is very much appreciated. And on another note, I tossed "IS,HW" onto "CS" space last night just to be able to put the link, and I had to spend a lot of time making it readable this morning. Looks good, now; the weird spaces and such are fixed. You might want to keep in mind that this is the first fanfic of any length that I ever wrote, and it shows. I want to go back to it and give it some good revision once "CS" and "TC" are done.
Read Chamomile slowly 'cause it's going to have to last you. I just don't know how to handle Fulcrum & Counterbalance yet, because what I had from before (differently titled) is total crap (okay, 90% crap, to be honest) and I just don't believe that things happened that way. We'll see, we'll see.
This is either a sexy or a very unsexy chapter, I haven't decided. Maybe its both. I'm satisfied with it. But I do feel the need to warn you that if you feel a little uncomfortable by the end of it, well, then you're getting what I meant.
Lots going on in this chapter, and unlike Study, it's not really about the sex. (I thought it would be longer, but oh well. It feels right as is.)
Incidently, I made some subtle changes to 8, and now I think that it reads better.
Feedback, as always, is very much appreciated. And on another note, I tossed "IS,HW" onto "CS" space last night just to be able to put the link, and I had to spend a lot of time making it readable this morning. Looks good, now; the weird spaces and such are fixed. You might want to keep in mind that this is the first fanfic of any length that I ever wrote, and it shows. I want to go back to it and give it some good revision once "CS" and "TC" are done.
Read Chamomile slowly 'cause it's going to have to last you. I just don't know how to handle Fulcrum & Counterbalance yet, because what I had from before (differently titled) is total crap (okay, 90% crap, to be honest) and I just don't believe that things happened that way. We'll see, we'll see.
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Hmm...
Date: 2004-04-28 03:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-04-28 04:38 pm (UTC)just grazing the surface, intimate means adding the doubts and fears along.
I loved the yin and yang image of their hairs mixed. Now that I think of it, those two look incredible together.