"Take Comfort" -- new chapter in.
Apr. 16th, 2004 02:14 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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This isn't my favorite chapter, but I let it sit for a long while, and then completely reworked it today.
I'd written about half of Lessons, one of the chapters that I had been looking forward to (Ch 16), and realized that I wasn't happy with it either. I started mulling over what the problem was, and that led to some thoughts on improving 15. It's readable, now, I think. Touya and Yukito sound more "right". It reads as though I've forgotten about Yue, but that's just because it's a transitional chapter, and I had a few things to set up first.
Doing "Clow Stories" and "Take Comfort" at the same time makes things messy in my head regarding Yue. So now I have to decide: Lessons, or Idleness & Ease? Nadeshiko, or Clow? I think "CS" is going to win out this time, because I already have a later chapter 90% finished.
I think I am going to bow out of this week's challenge. I was thinking about what I believe in (and I have very strong beliefs), and I don't think I could do anything with CCS characters.