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butterflydreaming ([personal profile] butterflydreaming) wrote2005-09-13 11:28 pm
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"For Being a Woman"

This re-discovered poem is nearly a year old.



He would have kissed me, for being a woman
     had I not confused my days
A simple pleasure of physical touching
     a sensualist's goodbye
And had he kissed me, would I have minded?
I'm not, for such a small thing, shy.
     In friendship it would have been accepted,
or in interest, or in desire,
     Yet were it just "for being a woman"
The offer would have raised my ire.

9-20-2004

[identity profile] butterflydrming.livejournal.com 2005-09-13 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
And at first, I couldn't remember who it was about! True!
ironymaiden: (my pen!)

[personal profile] ironymaiden 2005-09-24 11:39 am (UTC)(link)
congratulations.

[identity profile] shadawyn.livejournal.com 2005-09-13 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your poetry. I wish I had that talent :)

[identity profile] leatherdykeuk.livejournal.com 2005-09-14 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
lovely.

[identity profile] artyartie.livejournal.com 2005-09-14 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
That was beautiful - your poetry is so lyrical. I love the way the words fall.