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butterflydreaming ([personal profile] butterflydreaming) wrote2010-09-11 05:31 pm

Grammar, please

Which is correct when one person is alive and the other is deceased?

1."They both knew how to... ."
2."They both know how to... ."

Awkward no matter which.

[identity profile] the-sybil.livejournal.com 2010-09-12 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
difficult. I think, on balance, I'd go with (1), but to be honest I'd probably try and re-word the whole thing to avoid the problem. Sorry not to be more help!

[identity profile] adventurat.livejournal.com 2010-09-12 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
ditto.

[identity profile] mimerki.livejournal.com 2010-09-12 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
Casually, I'd probably go for #1 or say something like "Jane knew and Deety knows how to..." So: What she said, with example.

[identity profile] shadow-and-veil.livejournal.com 2010-09-12 05:41 pm (UTC)(link)
If I were writing, I'd throw it all out and start more cleanly, because a quick fix is still clunky.

[identity profile] mysticalforest.livejournal.com 2010-09-12 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Can you make one of them a zombie? Because that would solve it and be cool. :)

Barring that, what [livejournal.com profile] the_sybil said.

[identity profile] shadow-and-veil.livejournal.com 2010-09-12 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Especially because it would be a zombie Freddie Mercury.

[identity profile] shadow-and-veil.livejournal.com 2010-09-12 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
No, no -- just the right amount of help. :)