Mmm...really fascinating concept. I like the idea of someone picking up where a mortal's life left off prematurely--and the concept of an angel torn between heaven and hell. The only thing I took pause at was the pacing...I don't know how long you have this planned for, though, and that really matters. I was almost hoping you'd leave us in the dark a little longer, so to speak -- you could almost drop that information over the course of a chapter, and then use the descent into hell as the beginning of a much longer story... but well, it all depends on your pacing. I'm definitely interested in reading more; thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2004-07-08 05:03 pm (UTC)