...in a good way, of course. Your chapters always leave me craving more, and this one was no exception. In this case, I was cursing myself for starting to read this fic before it had finished--because I'm so terribly eager to dive into the next chapter :D Your writing is riveting enough without the sex, and now that the fic *has* sex, it just might give me a heartattack :D I'm terribly curious to see where this is all going...because we know at least something of how the story ends already...
Also, even if it doesn't have exactly the same flow as the previous chapters did, it is by *no means* bad. I really like how you've captured the feeling of the early passion in a relationship, and if I wasn't hooked before I'm captivated now.
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branchandroot
Madam, you are evil incarnate...
Date: 2004-04-24 08:05 am (UTC)Also, even if it doesn't have exactly the same flow as the previous chapters did, it is by *no means* bad. I really like how you've captured the feeling of the early passion in a relationship, and if I wasn't hooked before I'm captivated now.
*taps out a vein, pleads for more SOON*
^_^