The "Y/N" thing is a big turn-off - not least because I can't help reading it as "Yes/No (delete as applicable)"!
More elegant to write the story in the second person avoiding giving any name to the character at all, I'd have thought; realistically, people tend not to use given names to address others half so often as they do in fiction anyway...
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Date: 2019-02-06 11:32 pm (UTC)More elegant to write the story in the second person avoiding giving any name to the character at all, I'd have thought; realistically, people tend not to use given names to address others half so often as they do in fiction anyway...