One of the choices that I was concerned with, with this, was the use of the word "condition". It has job-related connotations that work in my head and in the verse, and I'm not sure how it sounds w/o those connotations. [As in, "prior to funding conditions": items that have to be collected and presented before business can proceed.]
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Date: 2005-07-25 07:13 am (UTC)One of the choices that I was concerned with, with this, was the use of the word "condition". It has job-related connotations that work in my head and in the verse, and I'm not sure how it sounds w/o those connotations. [As in, "prior to funding conditions": items that have to be collected and presented before business can proceed.]