Since I'm doing the challenge this Thursday, what do you think about a father challenge? I was toying with the idea before, but your comment has solidified it some. It'll probably be the choice between Tomoyo's father or Syaoran's, though, since his father isn't mentioned at all either.
Lovely story. Sonomi seemed lost in a dream, very detached from everything, even the possibility of being pregnant. She is just as I would have imagined, somewhere between duly dutifull & complacent and cold & lonely. The line about Sonomi ignoring Touya and Fujitaka really added weight to her detachment: she didn't even have anger for Fujitaka. It was all about Nadeshiko. Wonderful job, I really enjoyed reading this piece.
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Date: 2004-09-08 03:06 pm (UTC)Since I'm doing the challenge this Thursday, what do you think about a father challenge? I was toying with the idea before, but your comment has solidified it some. It'll probably be the choice between Tomoyo's father or Syaoran's, though, since his father isn't mentioned at all either.
Lovely story. Sonomi seemed lost in a dream, very detached from everything, even the possibility of being pregnant. She is just as I would have imagined, somewhere between duly dutifull & complacent and cold & lonely. The line about Sonomi ignoring Touya and Fujitaka really added weight to her detachment: she didn't even have anger for Fujitaka. It was all about Nadeshiko. Wonderful job, I really enjoyed reading this piece.